Tuesday, October 03, 2006

Feel

Why do you look so sad , my lover
Why do you look so sad ?

Look at the deep dark sea
Swirling in restless tranquility
Look at the silver studded moon
Moving slowly yet too soon
Look at the the beauty of twilight
A transient breath of uncertainty
Look at me this moment
Thrown beyond happiness or pleasure
Beyond anything describable
By your touch and the feel of your breath

She smiled , the most beatific smile
and rested her head and her worries on my lap.

11 comments:

Freespirit said...

Wow!! God I wish someone writes me something like that some time. :)

The Solitary Reaper said...

Profound!!

Deeps said...

I second Freespirt's comment. I wish somebody would say this to me {sigh}. Well, I think I'll send this to my hubby and give him a hint :-p :-D.

Harish Suryanarayana said...

@fs,deeps --> And I have no one to say it too [:(] *Boohoo*

@ Reaper --> [:)]

Canary said...

dropped in from Deeps' blog.. good fun to read your posts.. :)
waiting to see when u oblige her tag! :p

Harish Suryanarayana said...

Hello Canary ! Thanks for dropping by ! And yes I obliged :P .

bittersweet said...

When u look at me my sweet
and my throbbing heart
veers a pause
tween taunting doubt
and the deep embrace
of your woe filled pools
I ask
see you not
that mine own
which you claim as shadow-cast
do naught but mirror
your unrest-
your spirit distraught?

as your hopeful verse
strains to soothe
i feel the struggle you espouse
Beauty transient
ephemeral peace
seconds abandon
slowed not
by meanings we bequeath

Evanescence.

I weep my love
for your pain
I know now you know-
Mortality remains.

yet this fragile spirit of mine
so fast entwined with thine
shudders
to watch you grieve

I lay my head against your heart
in silent whispers speak,
come my faith
let us feign
and trick from Time
a moment's life;
let us sigh
as one and create
a timeless realm
of private calm
a wayward song
pure and whole
to esconce safe
in Memory's palm.

HN said...

Good One Da!

Harish Suryanarayana said...

@BitterSweet -- > Thank you for those verses and for dropping by .

@HN --> Thanks anna :)

nisha said...

nice blog harish..just went through it...

Harish Suryanarayana said...

Thank you Nisha . Coming from you , thats a huge compliment :) .