Sunday, April 16, 2006

We

Yes I am a man
Yes I am one
By the time you are ready ,
I'd be done


I work real hard
At my own rate
To bring happiness
To my mate


The look on her face
When she does see
How hard I work
To make her happy


She cooks my meal
Which I greatly relish
She has made me my
Most favourite dish


We understand each other
We know we care
I love her more
Than i can dare


In my power what I can
I will do
To be with her
I know she will too


She is my own
Protect her I will
Till my very last breath
Makes me lay still.


PS : This is inspired by
  • Amritha's poem.
  • Though I started off with a different goal in mind , it generally veered , as usual ,to my blumbering , blubbering romantic inclinations .Time spent : 10 minutes . I wonder if I am in love or something these days. I dont even know what that is ... Scary !

    15 comments:

    LovingAndLosing said...

    Haha. You're adorable. So is the poem!
    You might want to do a heart-beat/pulse-rate count to see if its faster than normal!

    N said...

    connects... you still haven't told me the reason to your entry into juke box..Am i allowed to make assumptions on the basis of this post..who is it??

    Harish Suryanarayana said...

    @Ms V : Thank you , Thank you :) .

    @Swap : Ai ga ! Not even remotely related ...

    Amritha R said...

    Am I really right in thinking that this poem is inspired by mine?? Well if it is I am mightily taken aback.

    Harish Suryanarayana said...

    @Amritha : My poem has indeed no connection as far as content goes to yours. It is just the rhyming scheme that is somewhat similar . It was inspired by yours in the sense that I wanted to write something related to what you wrote, but digressed . But it started off because of your poem :8 . No need to be so 'mightily taken aback' . :)

    Amritha R said...

    Yes Harish all that I understand. I am just taken aback that something I wrote can start something. Not to take away the credit from your poem. Very nice I should say :)

    Harish Suryanarayana said...

    Oh! I thought you were wondering about the content , which has quite no relation whatsoever...Slight misunderstanding ... Sure , you write extremely well and it appealed to me , poetry can do a lot to a person .. I neednt be telling you that of course :) :) ..

    Sri said...
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    Freespirit said...

    Some girl's gonna be mighty lucky o brave strong man!!

    Freespirit said...

    You removed the next post before I could comment. Bah..don't bother yourself about something so trivial..easier said than done..I know but there are many 'external' factors as you put it.

    Harish Suryanarayana said...

    @hedonia -> Thought I was behaving like a child .. should be mature enough to take rejection at this age .... But it still affects me and I have no control over it .

    Freespirit said...

    Well..everyone's got every right to be affected by it..irrespective of age just don't be too beat up about it..you know your worth.

    Unknown said...

    romantic....no more words.

    N said...

    what did u remove? never even saw the light of it..

    Anonymous said...

    It's that scary? I want my mommy! :P