Yes I am one
By the time you are ready ,
I'd be done
I work real hard
At my own rate
To bring happiness
To my mate
The look on her face
When she does see
How hard I work
To make her happy
She cooks my meal
Which I greatly relish
She has made me my
Most favourite dish
We understand each other
We know we care
I love her more
Than i can dare
In my power what I can
I will do
To be with her
I know she will too
She is my own
Protect her I will
Till my very last breath
Makes me lay still.
PS : This is inspired by
15 comments:
Haha. You're adorable. So is the poem!
You might want to do a heart-beat/pulse-rate count to see if its faster than normal!
connects... you still haven't told me the reason to your entry into juke box..Am i allowed to make assumptions on the basis of this post..who is it??
@Ms V : Thank you , Thank you :) .
@Swap : Ai ga ! Not even remotely related ...
Am I really right in thinking that this poem is inspired by mine?? Well if it is I am mightily taken aback.
@Amritha : My poem has indeed no connection as far as content goes to yours. It is just the rhyming scheme that is somewhat similar . It was inspired by yours in the sense that I wanted to write something related to what you wrote, but digressed . But it started off because of your poem :8 . No need to be so 'mightily taken aback' . :)
Yes Harish all that I understand. I am just taken aback that something I wrote can start something. Not to take away the credit from your poem. Very nice I should say :)
Oh! I thought you were wondering about the content , which has quite no relation whatsoever...Slight misunderstanding ... Sure , you write extremely well and it appealed to me , poetry can do a lot to a person .. I neednt be telling you that of course :) :) ..
Some girl's gonna be mighty lucky o brave strong man!!
You removed the next post before I could comment. Bah..don't bother yourself about something so trivial..easier said than done..I know but there are many 'external' factors as you put it.
@hedonia -> Thought I was behaving like a child .. should be mature enough to take rejection at this age .... But it still affects me and I have no control over it .
Well..everyone's got every right to be affected by it..irrespective of age just don't be too beat up about it..you know your worth.
romantic....no more words.
what did u remove? never even saw the light of it..
It's that scary? I want my mommy! :P
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