A few words, now and then, I ramble on ...
That was beautiful. short n sweet
Well written! add some more lines to it?
This was meant to be the first few lines of a short story I was planningto write. But it sounded right just by itself. Adding anything more just did not do it for me :) More left to the imagination of the reader .. okay Ill just shut up now.
Simple, yet profound. Naicely written ,I say!
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That was beautiful. short n sweet
Well written! add some more lines to it?
This was meant to be the first few lines of a short story I was planningto write. But it sounded right just by itself. Adding anything more just did not do it for me :) More left to the imagination of the reader .. okay Ill just shut up now.
Simple, yet profound. Naicely written ,I say!
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